Ok i guess
Way too short for actually be immersed into it... In short, it's too short for me to tell if it would actually be interesting. I suppose its the best you can do limited within 2 pages, but I would prefer a longer one next time. Kudos
Ok i guess
Way too short for actually be immersed into it... In short, it's too short for me to tell if it would actually be interesting. I suppose its the best you can do limited within 2 pages, but I would prefer a longer one next time. Kudos
Needs work...
You're characters look way too 2-D ish, you're got to learn how to colour the edges and draw the characters in a way that makes them look like 3D chars. Pls, I was hoping for a more 'Brawl' type of battle, with the percentage's and stuff, the story is great, but you need to work on your animation and battle scenes. Give the sandbag his own special moves too.
Awesome!
But ridiculously short. Pls make it longer or something. And an actual bad guy that asts longer than 10 seconds of battle.
Oh course, open the door with the warning symbol..
Nice 3D animation though. Just thought the 'zombie' cubes died too unrealistically, just flopped on the floor, but I guess since they're cubes they'll just die standing up otherwise huh?
Awesome.
Pretty good, nice interesting storyline. Nice comparing Pokemon storylines. My favourite was Combusken's, made me think of the hours I spent playing Mystery Dungeon, and the battle with Ho-oh was pretty cool too.
I have to agree with SimplyStudios on a couple of points though...
1. Combusken cannot beat Dusknoir, Fighting vs. Ghost.
2. Only Blaziken learns Blaze Kick on lv 42 or smth.
3. You forgot to include Absol's original move, Razor Wind. And I was hoping for Zangoose instead of Swampert.
Overall, good job, especially with a mouse.
Excellent Work.
Awesome work man, the story has been worn out but you're still a great animator. You better get an A+++ for this. Also, the way you turn the faces of you characters in slow-mo looks really cool.
Interesting...
Nice for using Naruto, and making a tribute to the Cliff, it was an awesome series which was unfortunately discontinued.
I definitely have to give you credit for the length. I certainly did not this much inspiration to produce a movie of such length. You've got the potential. However, two things to point out;
1. Make the characters bigger and don't make two battles fight on the screen at the same time. It's hard to do that and time it properly so just stick with one main character.
2. Timing is important. Your physics is off, it's really hard to explain so I'm going to try and keep it as simple as possible. Things speed up when they move fast. Like the rock for example. If its falling, then it should speed up, in short, frame 1 it falls... lets say 2cm, then frame2 it should move 4cm added to where it was in frame1, then frame3 maybe 9cm or something, you get the point? Same applies with people, Super Sayians, Naruto charaters, ok? Hope you get all that, it will make more sense when you start taking Physics.
Also, you should study other animators. Like Terkioz1 for example. About the best you can get in stick animation. Good luck.
You're right...
TOO SHORT. Really. It's barely 20 seconds long. The animation was really good though, which is why you deserve this 8/10
Pretty lazy. Don't expect too much from me.
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