AWESOME!!!!
Awesome story. This deserves so much more than it was rated. I can't wait for part 2. Also, I thought the conversations and transitions lacked a bit of background music.
AWESOME!!!!
Awesome story. This deserves so much more than it was rated. I can't wait for part 2. Also, I thought the conversations and transitions lacked a bit of background music.
Thanks I went through a lot of storyboard do overs. I'll remember to have more music next time, thanks.
Boring...
I know you can put more effort into that
I probably could, but I was just trying to keep it simple. My next one will be better :)
Nice nice!
Nice for only 15 seconds. Wish I could have seen more. Where does the other guy come from though???
Its ok
You did well with the voices and making them sound robotic and stuff, but you really need to work on your drawing. Consider getting a tablet.
I use to have tablet twice. Both weren't that good.
More work needed...
I understand this is ur first flash but you need to spend more time on it. If your gonna make random skits you'll need about 20 or something before submitting it.
LOL
Sometimes I just run my mouse over the replay button so I can hear the popping sound
Good, good,
Impressive, your story is good and original as far as I know, your animation needs a bit of work, as in its good but not perfect, the beginning was great but the flying scenes look a bit rushed, when this comes out make sure you take your time and you'll be sure to get a hit.
Thanks, I appreciate the review. I know I haven't perfected my animation yet, so I'm going to submit a few more times practicing a few different styles before I make this series. Glad you enjoyed it.
I love paradoxes.
You know, if everything is wrong, then your message which tells me everything is wrong is ACTUALLY WRONG, which means everything is right, but if everything is right, it means that your message 'everything you know is wrong' is actually right, and then you know were it goes on from there...
Anyway, Love the song, the animation is great, my favorite part is when the car just magically jumps over the divider into the other lane into the truck... could you do Amish Paradise next? That's my fav song from Weird Al
Um.....................
What the hell just happened? (Animation was AWESOME!)
Pretty lazy. Don't expect too much from me.
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