Dude, I know you're trying but seriously?
I don't know why you thought this was worth posting, but really, you've got to do better. Frankly, your drawing skills suck. Your animation skill isn't much better. If you are terribly lazy or just felt like posting something, it doesn't matter, GO AND PRACTICE. If you don't have Flash then you shouldn't use Paint to make up for it. I started out using Pivot Stick Animator when I began animating; I suggest to try and do that too.
About the animation itself; I don't even know what the storyboard is; my ears bled because of the voices. Your probably digitally changing your voice; please don't. I can't stand it. The animating is not existent, you just moved a bunch of characters around and drew some really crappy figures.
One again, please practice more. Even stick figures are better than this. You should make sure your entry is worth it before submitting it.