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[Noob Shall Not Pass]

Nice one.

The drawings were pretty awesome, but the presentation was boring. Personally, I think if you showed the kid/person whatever trying to submit one of those stupid *ick joke animations (appropriately named stupid *ick joke) and then the Gandalf clip played saying "You shall NOT PASS!" then laser, it would have been much funnier, and also alot of people (including myself) would have liked it better. The random fist and laser seemed a bit confusing and rushed.
Just thinking, this could be a nice idea if you plan to redo this animation. You most certainly have to potential to pull off something great that will get you perhaps a frontpage. Kudos.

PERASTIKOS responds:

Thanks man, good points, i learned a lot from this movie about how flash works and stuff, so hopefully the next movies will be better, i'll keep in mind your suggestions for the update of this movie!

[ScissorMan: Episode 1]

Cool, pretty cool.

Your drawing will improve over time, but I can definitely see the effort in the plot and other stuff. I suggest using a faster framerate, about 20-24fps, it will make your animation (and lip syncing) look a lot better. Credits were awesome, jokes were funny and creative. Kudos!

Camjo-Z responds:

Thanks! I'm using a faster fps in the next one, along with a larger screen size (and some actual animation).

[PWM8: Cure White & Death]

Lol, you again...

Well, you've definitely improved my view on this comic, but I though this lacked a bit. There just wasn't that interesting factor that I saw in your last two. I do appreicate the comics so keep them coming, but the story it's going somewhere. I guess. Kudos.

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

Of course it is. There's been plot a foot for a while. And I apologize, but this was a less serious and more humorous one. I'm trying to achieve a balance.
You'll see 9 soon enough. It's been done but I wanna get 10 finished (which I can't due to MORE TECHNICAL DIFFICULTIES) before I post it up here.

Thanks for the review and Kudos.

PS. Yes, me again :P

[Super Mario Spoof]

Sorry about your bro...

I wouldn't want to animate either if I lost one of my brothers.....
Anyway, about your animation. I would say that in terms of animation-motion you've got that down. However, if you're gonna make jokes, you've definitely gonna need more comical facial expressions for your characters. Also, I would suggest you add a bit more colour to your characters, a bit more shadow on different areas (experiment with this) so they look more 3D (unless you were actually aiming for 2D). The shotgun thing made me laugh, but longer would be better next time. Kudos and good luck.

soulreaver12000 responds:

Ah yes I see the comical facial expressions. Adding more color as far as shading or just making them more vibrant? Yeah I was thinking about adding shadows but I got really lazy and felt it would add more time movie but I guess someone did notice. I am glad you liked that joke I fleshed out a few other ideas that involved mario but with everything happening I just lost interest but still wanted feedback on the animation. Thanks!

[[LPP] Evil Narrator #1]

Interesting concept...

I kind of like the voice acting and the concept in total, but the graphics were definitely lacking. You really need to up it up on that part, and a bit more GRAPHIC ANIMATION will make this animation MUCH MORE SCARY. Good luck ;D

Elpeapee responds:

Cheers for the feedback. Once I get better at the animation I'm kind of going for a David Firth Salad Fingers style outlook on the animation as I love it and its creepy as hell!

[Naruto: Paradox Ep 1]

Bah... But it was good.

Let me not sound like a fag and list all the Naruto/Bleach inaccurate information, but to sum it up... It was a good animation. When I heard sprite I almost didn't watch it, but the battle's where truly awesome and the sound clips made it all the more interesting.
But the things I didn't like... 1. Crossing Naruto and Bleach. This is the first episode right? That really doesn't make any sense, Naruto is in a completely different world if not universe. 2. Sasuke could never beat all 6 Pains. It's just impossible. Naruto did it with Sage Mode and 7 Tails, but Sasuke with the Cursed Seal isnt good enough.
Anyway, it seems good so far, in terms of battles, not story. Keep up the good work.

MOA-OZZY responds:

I tried to make each character as strong as each other because we all know ichigo will destroy the whole of the naruto world. but i just wanted to entertain peole with the battle scenes. :-) hope you enjoyed it and thanks for the review

[PWM7: The Master & Miko]

Well, nice to see you again...

I have to say, I see a definite improvement in what I saw last episode. Your use of music is excellent to, (the classical really fits in, or where ever its from) I did like the battle scene, quite ingenious how you did the camera angles and other stuff.
Just a couple of things to work on; Presentation. The opening picture and stuff looks a bit too plain. Dunno the reason but you could always spice it up with some glowing and other effects. Also, for some reason the 'back' button disappeared so when I mistakenly double-clicked forward I had to start all over again... (once again, a bit of glowing could spice up the arrows too). Anyway, good luck on your comic/whatever, Kudos.

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

You have no clue how difficult it was to take some of those pictures. I had to get in awkward positions, and in those awkward positions the camera would shaaaake...it was terrible...
I'm glad you appreciate it though.
Also, as you correctly assumed, the opening pictures are supposed to be plain. Considering they're always there in the background at at all times, I don't want them to be too noticeable when the show goes on, as I learned a long time ago that flashy stuff is okay as long as it doesn't distract from what it is originally you're looking at. It'll also hopefully cut out on the load time for the preloader, and frankly, the sort of simple but encompassing background motif is something I wanted from the start.
As for the back button, I purposely removed it. I had gotten a few complaints about how the music would fuck up if you used it, and no matter what I did I couldn't exactly fix it: I'm not good with coding. More people have complained about it not being there then not, so I brought it back in 9.