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[ParidigmShift-In Progress]

Animation ok. Storyline needs work...

Beginning is WAY TOO LONG. NO ONE TYPES THAT SLOW. The Glue thing was kind of creepy, and then the surfing part really made no sense. Your animation is perfect though, no problem that. Your story needs a bit more work though, if you're doing this for a non-profit organization, I should be feeling more sorry for the children, or inspired by the work that the organization is doing. I suggest you try changing this by maybe making someone rescue the boy after the whole 'glue incident', and THEN he goes surfing with that person, showing that he was liberated from the streets. And the person should probably be wearing the organization's shirt.
Don't know if you will put it all in your animation but I hope it helps.

Zeebra responds:

Hey thanks for the helpful ideas. The story was alot longer but time was short so the lectures told me to only animate two scenes because animating takes FOrEver. So i lost the storyline along the way but the story is vital.
Thanks again for your ideas.

["Red Stars" Music Video]

Coolio!

Your animation is awesome! Although it's been said many times before, the sound needs work. I'll appreciate hearing this again.

Baron7 responds:

Thanks, and for the sound I will fix it soon as I can. I'm running after a near 3 year old right now, but when he chills I will look at it. The song is kinda made sceechy sounding like that but I will try to tone it down.

[Budge007 Show Reel 2010]

Cool collab!

The sounds from Show Reel Intro come from Banjo Kazooie, right? Awesome, haven't played that game in like... since I was five or something...

Budj responds:

I've whored that intro a few times already :<.

[An_Rainstorm]

Art, not animation

Nice drawing, but it's just an infinite loop. Do some artwork instead.

SirCannabisClock responds:

This is artwork you sally! You meant animation

[DemonicBrotherhoodPreview]

Keep it going...

Man, you've got a story hidden in there somewhere but you've got to develop it, the video needs to be a bit longer, and through in a twist or two so that people who want to watch what comes next... Voices would help

Vis7a responds:

episode 1 will be much longer this is thust a preview :) and we relay need a famale to voice act the main character :)

[Extreme Happiness]

Oooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkk........

That's a weird little character you've got there...

Brewster responds:

Yes yes I know.

[esquizo teaser]

Nice!!!

Awesome graphics man, hope the game doesn't disappoint

juanmorza responds:

actually is a fake trailer dude, i wish i had the time to make it, and also a good programmer

hahah so i guess its already a disappoint

[Blob Fight (Part I)]

Nice!

Good for a test run, needs to be longer though, nice sound effects

Stobak responds:

thanks! im already working on another thats decent length this time. hopefully much better

[Adventures of Beach Boy]

Ok I guess

Nice graphics, but the shortness spoils it. And give the boy some shorts, will ya?

Zeebra responds:

Its short but production was long, about 50 hours.
yes good point i need to add clothes to the naked boy.
thanks for your input.

["Boo."]

Cool

Cool, dunno how you got the static background to work but it looks awesome

Mezmerization responds:

I just downloaded a static .gif off of Google Images, decreased the alpha to 30% in flash, then put it in a layer over all of the other layers in Flash. Thanks for the review.