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[Terrorism: The Effects]

Um... I sort of confused...

What the heck are you getting at?
Content: You start with mental health, then UK response compared to US response, and finally a simulation of a bombing at Long Beach. I'm confused... I thought this was a history lesson? You haven't done much on that subject, apart from talking about terrorist related subjects without making a point. Some of the illustrations are funny, but generally not. And where are you getting your information from? Unless you have a Ph.D in Terrorist Psychology or something I can't just take your word for this.
Graphics: Apart from the fact that you used a lot of random pictures, your drawing is generally terrible. Some of them were decent, like the beginning and the radiation poisoning parts, but overall, not.
Voice: Sounded too scripted rather than conversational, like it was supposed to be. The general music was okay though.
Overall, this animation wasn't very 'informative' as it was meant to be. The graphics were too bad and the topic wasn't well thought out. You need to rethink this, if you want to make it funny, then do so, if you want to be serious and informative, then do so. The in-between stance doesn't work well on a delicate subject like terrorism. Sorry 4 writing so much.

Flaxington responds:

I actually got my information from somewhere online. I realize that it wasn't as informative as it should be which is one of the things I didn't really like about it.

[Finders Creepers]

Welcome then!

Nice story, nice presentation. Though the quality could be improved, your animation could not. Hope to see new work from you!

[VR_Training]

Nice!

The presentation of the computer was definitely may favorite part of the flash. Even though, because everything is silver its hard to establish the floor and walls and ceiling... also the music and sound effects made it hard to establish a sense of urgency when he's running away.
But overall, great animation. The drawings were flawless, and I loved the way the Virtual training machine constructs everything... The fighting was well timed and very accurate, no extra showing things or people getting punched through walls at random. I agree with djgo, a sequel is needed.

xtended12 responds:

Thanks :) I will definitely think about making a second part :D.

[Animated Short: Save Me]

Brilliant!

Your style of drawing is awesome, even with the sketchy lines and stuff, the voices were great, the music was a good choice, and the story was brilliant. You might want to smoothen (yes, that isn't a word) your lines a bit though, if you have a tablet that will help.

[Soup of the Day: #2]

Not exactly the best work I've seen

But okay I guess, if you consider Actionscript and voices. Story and art... need to be worked on. Seriously.

Little-Rena responds:

Oh okay

[Pkmn: World of Chaos Ep 4]

It was ok...

But the pokemon fights were unrealistic... as in, none of the good teams died! Not going to call on the problems with the pokemon since I haven't played the new ones... (But you know Kygore can't fly, right?) and Wailords are certainly bigger than that... Anyway, good storyline, the characters are decent, though I still don't like sprites that much, you seemed to have customized some... but I still wish for better animation, some of it was too choppy, or different quality pictures next to each other...

teejay-number13 responds:

Did you watch episode 2 and 3,? Because some of the good Pokemon got thrashed in those episodes. Also, I'm basing this mostly on the games and not the TV show, and water pokemon fight out of the water as well. Also, according to the guides, Wailord is only about the size of a city bus. With sprite flashes, you take what you can get. So sprites from Pokemon Ruby won't look the same as those from Pokemon Black, for example. You just have to roll with it.

[Nyan Nyan Lemon]

BAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

The worst part is that it even passed the under judgment section...

LMNZ responds:

wooooooo!!!!!

[Deliverance ep. 2]

Nice!

It seems you managed to make all the improvements without me having to tell you about it. The Ace Attorney part made me laugh, nice job. More interesting characters, better animation, an even more interesting plot (which I didn't even think was possible).
I still suggesting blur, and maybe setting your music from event to stream should fix the syncing problems...
I'll say you're pretty good from here on. Can't wait for your next work!

PParreira responds:

thank you very much, but still, the next one doesn't have any blur effects, sorry =(

[Deliverance ep. 1]

Pretty sweet work

I can already tell that this has great potential. You do need to work on your art though, and perhaps you can rake up a couple of voice actors on NG, but don't listen to me, I don't have enough experience about this anyway.
Art: You need to use the blur more. Your backgrounds look very flat, just look up the tutorial section and it should explain. Your characters are fine, but you need to use the filters a bit more. The anime-like expressions are great, and voice sync is pretty cool too.
Sound: Sounds are pretty great by themselves. The voicing is very good, although by sound alone its pretty hard to tell the two guys apart. The random clips work well, just add a little background music and you should be fine.
Story: Pretty self-explanatory. Great characters, great storyline. The subs are... mostly incorrect.

PParreira responds:

thanks a lot for the review, very well put
there are still a lot of aspects that I gotta work on, and a lot of effects that I still don't know how to use.

I allready posted episode 2, hope ya like it
=)

[Pokemon But With Animals2]

OMG!!!

Those random sentences kept me laughing for at least an hour...
But seriously now, it seems that in order to keep it as a proper 'series' you ended up using a lot of your old jokes, (like the beating up pokemon/animals thing), which kinda killed the awesome randomness that the first one had. Also, you didn't advance a lot storywise (still inbetween 1st and 2nd gym) so its not... as new anymore, and there wasn't enough 'new' things in the storyline to make fun of.
Well, appreciate the last part, unfortunately and fortunately some of those sentences were funnier than the video... But it still shows that you have the comedic potential...
Finally, I wished that Gary's montage was more hardcore... he did have a gun all that time... congrats to the music maker, and I can't wait for TEAM ROCKET!!!! OMG... I'm still laughing... one line of irrelevant... haha...