GD JOB.
Wow, for such crappy music, you did a good job. Length though.
GD JOB.
Wow, for such crappy music, you did a good job. Length though.
Sadly, i couldn't change music or the length, but i'll work on other projects later which will hopefully be in a good length.
Good job
U've got some pretty nice effects with the laser and sword thing. Would love to see more work.
Animation ok. Storyline needs work...
Beginning is WAY TOO LONG. NO ONE TYPES THAT SLOW. The Glue thing was kind of creepy, and then the surfing part really made no sense. Your animation is perfect though, no problem that. Your story needs a bit more work though, if you're doing this for a non-profit organization, I should be feeling more sorry for the children, or inspired by the work that the organization is doing. I suggest you try changing this by maybe making someone rescue the boy after the whole 'glue incident', and THEN he goes surfing with that person, showing that he was liberated from the streets. And the person should probably be wearing the organization's shirt.
Don't know if you will put it all in your animation but I hope it helps.
Hey thanks for the helpful ideas. The story was alot longer but time was short so the lectures told me to only animate two scenes because animating takes FOrEver. So i lost the storyline along the way but the story is vital.
Thanks again for your ideas.
LOLOL
Awesome, I was watching this in class and had to try so hard not to laugh, again awesome
SUGOI! SUGOI! SUGOI!
(Sugoi means Awesome btw). Your animating skills are awesome! THIS IS HOW POKEMON SHOULD BE!!! Man, this is so worth watching!!! And Mewtwo And Dexyos next?!?!?! AWESOME!!! CAN'T WAIT!!!
Coolio!
Your animation is awesome! Although it's been said many times before, the sound needs work. I'll appreciate hearing this again.
Thanks, and for the sound I will fix it soon as I can. I'm running after a near 3 year old right now, but when he chills I will look at it. The song is kinda made sceechy sounding like that but I will try to tone it down.
BAH!
The story might have been good, but the fact I had to click next all the time kind of ruined it. Remove the buttons and get the timing right. Also, basically no animation involved. Just pictures put together. I know you can do better (do I sound like a teacher?)
Awesome. Story and Animation.
TOTALLY WORTH THE WAIT.
Good try
Good animation wasted on a pointless effort. Needs to be a little longer too
AAAAWWWWWWEEEEESSSSSOOOOOMMMMMMMMEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just perfect. This is just the ultimate Mario tribute. Perfect animation, I love the way you included Luigi and Toad more than normal, and totally rejected Peach! AWESOME!
Pretty lazy. Don't expect too much from me.
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