MiloticMaster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ScissorMan: Episode 1]

Cool, pretty cool.

Your drawing will improve over time, but I can definitely see the effort in the plot and other stuff. I suggest using a faster framerate, about 20-24fps, it will make your animation (and lip syncing) look a lot better. Credits were awesome, jokes were funny and creative. Kudos!

Camjo-Z responds:

Thanks! I'm using a faster fps in the next one, along with a larger screen size (and some actual animation).

[Moustaches]

Awesome Song and Animation...

There is nothing more I can say. Only problem is that after a while the song and animation become out of sync. After watching it for the 25th time or so. Lol.

[Galaxy Wartorn: Prior]

Interesting... but not enough...

You definitely have a skill in using flash. But I feel that this flash was lacking... interesting stuff. Most of the scenes had a severe lack of background sound or voices, and the text was mostly small and difficult to read. Even though your drawings were pretty good, most were done with the line/pencil tool, which gave everything a very 2D like perspective. The story wasn't especially captivating or exciting in anyway... neither did I find any of the characters interesting or intriguing...
The 'connecting' part was really long and annoying... the death of General 'Warpath was rather random... (but great drawings). The loading thing with the hologram was rather cool, but the lack of voices ruined the scene...
Sorry to point out so many bad things, but i'm trying to identify what you need to improve. If this is your first flash movie, you should experiment before trying to make a massive storyline. You definitely need to work on using the brush/pencil tool, because the drawings are really 2D and look childish. Try not relying on real pictures so much and get in touch with your drawing skills. The last scene with the planets was very nicely coordinated. Hope to see something better from you later!

[Panty and Stocking]

It was awesome... until it ended...

The animation was wonderful, but it ended all to soon... if the anime is on the same level as this animation then it's definitely worth watching! Kudos!

[Mario and the ?-Block]

Pretty sweet!

All the jokes were pretty funny, but here's a couple of things to work on;
It obviously needs a preloader.
The Hadoken was too soft and I missed it the first time.
There is constantly a white box around the screen.
Some actions need to be slowed down so that the viewer can see them better. And also to create tension. Pretty nice job with this, love to see more!

[PWM8: Cure White & Death]

Lol, you again...

Well, you've definitely improved my view on this comic, but I though this lacked a bit. There just wasn't that interesting factor that I saw in your last two. I do appreicate the comics so keep them coming, but the story it's going somewhere. I guess. Kudos.

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

Of course it is. There's been plot a foot for a while. And I apologize, but this was a less serious and more humorous one. I'm trying to achieve a balance.
You'll see 9 soon enough. It's been done but I wanna get 10 finished (which I can't due to MORE TECHNICAL DIFFICULTIES) before I post it up here.

Thanks for the review and Kudos.

PS. Yes, me again :P

[How RE4 needed to end]

Ok I guess...

I'm not familiar with the game but the story was pretty cool. Actually animation would have been nice, but you did a pretty good job with what you have. Voice acting was pretty awesome, so was the music.The facial expressions were funny too. Good work! (But it does loop)

[Super Mario Spoof]

Sorry about your bro...

I wouldn't want to animate either if I lost one of my brothers.....
Anyway, about your animation. I would say that in terms of animation-motion you've got that down. However, if you're gonna make jokes, you've definitely gonna need more comical facial expressions for your characters. Also, I would suggest you add a bit more colour to your characters, a bit more shadow on different areas (experiment with this) so they look more 3D (unless you were actually aiming for 2D). The shotgun thing made me laugh, but longer would be better next time. Kudos and good luck.

soulreaver12000 responds:

Ah yes I see the comical facial expressions. Adding more color as far as shading or just making them more vibrant? Yeah I was thinking about adding shadows but I got really lazy and felt it would add more time movie but I guess someone did notice. I am glad you liked that joke I fleshed out a few other ideas that involved mario but with everything happening I just lost interest but still wanted feedback on the animation. Thanks!

[[LPP] Evil Narrator #1]

Interesting concept...

I kind of like the voice acting and the concept in total, but the graphics were definitely lacking. You really need to up it up on that part, and a bit more GRAPHIC ANIMATION will make this animation MUCH MORE SCARY. Good luck ;D

Elpeapee responds:

Cheers for the feedback. Once I get better at the animation I'm kind of going for a David Firth Salad Fingers style outlook on the animation as I love it and its creepy as hell!

[Hammerspace]

Well pretty sweet...

The music carries on after the ending though. It's was kind of short but I guess that's okay if now you've got CS5 and you're moving on to better things. I did think the story is a bit lacking but again, the next one would probably be better. The extra stuff was kind of cool too.

tomtyke responds:

i actually made the music carry through to the title again, just beacause i liked it enough to have to keep going in the background while i animated XD